It seems to have millions of red-hot needles stuck in it. Carlos del Puente Stories
lunes, junio 16, 2025The file lay open on the worn desk, smelling faintly of dust and decay, a scent that seemed to cling to everything connected with Blackwood Manor. Doctor Alistair Blackwood, his face lined with a fatigue that went deeper than mere sleeplessness, ran a trembling hand over the pages. The ink was faded in places, the paper brittle, but the words retained a chilling vibrancy, a testament to the events they described. This was his account, supplemented by disjointed notes from the late Father Michael and the tragically brief journal of Brother Thomas. A 'true crime', the locals had called it, reducing the cosmic horror to a police matter, a question of bodies and causes, when it was so much more.
The request had come from the Harrows, a family whose ancestral home, Blackwood Manor, lay deep within a sprawl of ancient, untamed forest, a place where the wildness of nature felt less like beauty and more like a brooding, patient observer. Their daughter, Elara, a fragile girl of seventeen, had succumbed to an affliction that baffled physicians. Not madness, they insisted, but something... else. Her physical deterioration was alarming, her periods of lucor punctuated by unsettling, violent episodes and a voice that was definitively not hers. Desperate, they had turned to the Church, specifically to Father Michael, known for his unwavering faith and quiet, formidable presence. Blackwood, a man of science invited more to mollify the family than out of any expectation of diagnostic insight, found himself an unwilling observer of a descent into the gothic depths of genuine terror.
The manor itself was a masterpiece of decay. Stone gargoyles with eroded faces leered from damp battlements. Ivy like skeletal hands clung to weeping walls. Inside, the air was perpetually cold, thick with the scent of mildew and failing plaster. Shadows here weren't just the absence of light; they possessed a strange density, a palpable weight that seemed to press down, mature with age and something far older than the house itself. This wasn't mere neglect; it felt like deliberate suppression, a darkness that had grown contented, deeply rooted.
Elara was confined to her room in the West Wing, the largest and coldest chamber, chosen ironically for its distance from the rest of the household. When Blackwood first saw her, she was curled in a fetal position on the floor, humming a tuneless, guttural sound that resonated strangely in her chest. Her eyes, once a clear green, were clouded, darting with a feral intelligence that was deeply unsettling. Her limbs seemed too long, jointed at odd angles. And sometimes, Father Michael had noted in his preliminary observations, she would move with a sudden, springy locomotion, a series of unnerving hops or quick, low scuttles that were entirely alien, like something from the twilight world of marsupials startled in the bush. The raw, untamed quality of her movements contrasted horrifyingly with her delicate frame.
Father Michael arrived with Brother Thomas, a young man whose face was alight with fervent piety and a terrifying lack of cynicism. They set up their meager altar in the room – an old oak table draped with a white cloth, a tarnished silver crucifix, vials of holy water, and worn prayer books. The air grew heavy with incense, a thin barrier against the permeating dread.
The first session was tentative, exploratory. Father Michael began the prayers, his voice calm but firm. Elara, previously lethargic, began to stir. Her body twisted, contorting into impossible shapes. Her spine seemed to stretch and compress. And then the voice came.
It was a chorus, layered and ancient. Not whispers, but a low, resonant vibration that seemed to emanate from the very air around her, funneled through her throat. It was a sound of profound repugnance, laced with mockery. It spoke in numerous tongues Blackwood did not recognize, interspersed with foul blasphemies in Latin and English, aimed with chilling accuracy at the tenets of faith held by Father Michael and Brother Thomas. It was the voice of evil possessed, raw and unfiltered.
"He thinks his water means anything," the voice hissed, a sound like dry leaves skrattled over bone. "His trinkets are dust. We are old. Older than his God."
Brother Thomas flinched, pressing his crucifix tighter. Father Michael remained steadfast, his gaze fixed on Elara, his voice unwavering as he commanded the entity to identify itself. There was laughter then, a dry, rattling sound that seemed to peel the paint from the walls.
"Legion is a child's name," the voice chuckled, or rather, the room seemed to vibrate with malicious amusement. "We are the darkness you deny. The rot beneath your stones. The truth of your wild heart."
Over the next few days, the exorcism continued. The cycle was grueling. Prayers and commands from the priests, met with escalating resistance from Elara. The animalistic behaviour became more pronounced. She would crouch in corners, emitting strange clicks and whirs. Her eyes would glow faintly in the dim light. Once, she sprang from the bed with unnatural speed, landing in a peculiar, hunched posture, her small hands scratching at the floorboards with frantic energy, as if trying to dig a burrow. The sounds she made were guttural, primal, sometimes a low hiss, sometimes a sharp, barking cough. It was the wild, untamed heart given voice and form, filtered through something alien and nightmarish.
Blackwood, scientifically minded, tried to rationalize – catalepsy, schizophrenia, complex tics combined with psychosis. But the timing of her responses to the prayers, the impossible contortions, the malevolent intelligence in her eyes, the voice that knew things it shouldn't... his certainty began to fray.
The atmosphere in the room grew heavier, colder. The shadows seemed to deepen, coalescing in corners, watching. The darkness outside the window, the ancient forest, felt like a mirror of the darkness inside, both vast, indifferent, and implicitly hostile.
On the fifth night, something shifted. Father Michael had reached a crucial point in the ritual, reciting the Litany of Saints, a powerful invocation. Elara’s screaming intensified, reaching a pitch that felt like needles in the eardrums. Her body arched off the bed, suspended in the air, solely supported by an unseen force. The air in the room grew viscous, difficult to breathe.
And then, the feeling began.
It wasn't a physical touch, not exactly. It was a sensation spread across Blackwood's skin, under his clothes, everywhere at once. A million tiny points, burning hot, pressing inward. It felt as if his entire surface was covered in red-hot needles being slowly, deliberately pushed into his flesh. It was excruciating, overwhelming. He gasped, clutching his arms, looking wildly around the room. Father Michael and Brother Thomas were suffering too. Their faces twisted in agony, sweat beading on their foreheads despite the room’s cold. Father Michael’s voice faltered mid-prayer, a strangled cry escaping his lips. Brother Thomas collapsed to his knees, his face pressed to the floor, whimpering.
This was the presence. Not a figure, not a shape, but an immersive, tormenting reality. The devil had appeared, not in a physical form one could confront with iron and faith, but as an atmosphere of absolute, mature evil, a palpable punishment. The darkness in the room seemed to pulse, deepening to an absolute void that swallowed light and hope. The repugnance radiating from Elara, from the very air, was suffocating, an offense to every clean thing. It wasn't just something evil was present; it was that evil was the environment now.
The voice from Elara’s lips, though she was choking on air that felt like fire, changed again. It was no longer a chorus, but a singular entity, ancient and vast. It wasn't loud, but it filled the mind, bypassed the ears.
You think you know suffering? it whispered, a sound like mountains grinding to dust. This is but a taste of what the wild knows. What the earth remembers. What I am.
Elara's body began to twist further, her bones popping audibly. Her skin seemed to ripple, darkening, taking on a rough, leathery texture in places. Her features flattened, becoming less human, more... something else. Her eyes, wide and vacant, suddenly focused on Brother Thomas, still huddled on the floor.
With terrifying speed, and executing that same impossible, springy movement, Elara launched herself from her suspended position. Father Michael shouted a warding prayer, but his voice was weak, his body wracked by the burning needles sensation. Brother Thomas, paralyzed by the intense pain and terror, could only watch as Elara landed lightly beside him, stooping in that unsettling, marsupial-like crouch.
Her hand, now ending in thick, claw-like nails, reached out. Brother Thomas cried out, a short, sharp sound cut tragically brief. What happened next was obscured by the sudden, violent plunging of the room into complete darkness, the lamplight extinguished as if swallowed by the 'mature' shadows. But the sounds...
There were sounds of tearing flesh, of wet, horrible rending. And Elara's voice, no longer the layered chorus or the ancient whisper in the mind, but a series of sharp, hungry clicks and guttural hoots, chillingly devoid of human emotion, terrifyingly animalistic.
When the light returned, weakly, ten minutes later – the lamp flickering back to life as if it had merely been held captive – the scene was one of unspeakable horror. Brother Thomas lay dead, his chest savaged, his eyes wide with a terror that would forever haunt Blackwood. Elara was gone. Not fled through the locked door, not out the barred window. Simply... gone. The only trace was a smear of blood and a few dark, coarse hairs on the torn bedding. The room was colder than before, the air still thick with that punishing, needle-like sensation on the skin, though it slowly began to recede, leaving behind a lingering itch and a profound violation.
Father Michael was found hours later, huddled in a corner, reciting prayers in a rapid, barely coherent mumble. His faith had not broken, but something within him had been irrevocably damaged. He spoke only of the crushing weight of ancient evil, of the 'punishment' for daring to challenge it, and the 'wildness' that had consumed the girl. He never fully recovered, spending his remaining years in silent contemplation, his eyes holding the distant, haunted look of a man who had stared into the abyss and found it staring back with the alien, hungry eyes of a marsupial in the dark.
Dr. Blackwood’s report, filed with the local constabulary, spoke of an unknown animal attack of unprecedented savagery, combined with a shared hysterical delusion brought on by the stress of the exorcism attempt. He knew it was a lie. He knew what he had felt – the millions of red-hot needles, the suffocating repugnance, the ancient, mature darkness. He knew the sounds he had heard were not from any creature known to science. He knew that Elara Harrow had become the vessel for something truly evil, something that dwelled in the wild places of the soul and the earth, and that it had not been banished, but had simply chosen to leave, taking its prize, leaving behind only horror and the indelible stain of its presence. The old manor stood, silent and brooding, the darkness within now thicker, older, waiting. The true crime was not just the death of a man, but the violation of body and soul by an evil that felt primal, untamed, and hideously, profoundly real. The file ended abruptly, leaving the questions hanging like spectres in the cold, damp air of Blackwood Manor.
"You're not going to believe what I've got for you, Doc," the young constable said, dropping a dusty file onto Dr. Alistair Blackwood's desk. His eyes gleamed with a mix of excitement and dread.
Blackwood, a man of science and skepticism, raised an eyebrow. "Another 'haunted' manor?"
The constable nodded gravely. "Blackwood Manor. The Harrows' girl, Elara. They say she's... changed."
Blackwood sighed, his mind racing with the mundane possibilities. "And they've exhausted all medical explanations?"
"They've called for Father Michael. An exorcism," the constable whispered.
The doctor's curiosity was piqued despite his skepticism. "Very well, let's pay a visit," he said, tucking the file under his arm.
The drive to the manor was eerie, the dense forest seeming to lean in, the car's headlights piercing the gloom. The manor itself was a looming silhouette, its stones mottled with lichens that glowed faintly in the moonlight.
Inside, the air was thick with the scent of mildew and something less natural. It was cold, almost clammy, and the walls seemed to pulse with the echoes of ancient secrets.
Elara lay in her bed, her body taut with tension, eyes unseeing. When she spoke, it was in a language that sent shivers down the doctor's spine. It wasn't just the unearthly timbre of her voice, but the words themselves – a cacophony of ancient curses and the howls of wild beasts.
A young constable brings Dr. Alistair Blackwood a file about Blackwood Manor, where Elara Harrow has exhibited unexplained changes, prompting an exorcism request. Despite his skepticism, Blackwood visits the manor, noticing its eerie atmosphere and Elara's disturbing condition, where she speaks in an ancient, unnatural language that fills him with dread.
Father Michael and Brother Thomas had been trying to perform an exorcism. Their faith was strong, but the atmosphere was thick with fear. The girl's limbs bent at impossible angles, her eyes gleaming with a malicious intelligence that didn't belong to a human soul.
The prayers grew more fervent, the air thickening with incense. Elara's contortions grew wilder. Her body became a canvas for the demon's rage, each twist and arch a new line in a macabre dance.
The voice grew clearer, a chorus of malice that seemed to resonate through the very fabric of the room. "The wild calls to us," it cackled. "Your puny rituals mean nothing."
Blackwood watched, his heart pounding. This was no mere delusion or illness. The presence in the room was palpable, a living, malevolent force that seemed to revel in their fear.
The exorcism reached a fever pitch. The priests' voices grew hoarse, their faces pale with exhaustion. Elara's body was a blur of motion, her eyes burning with a predatory hunger. Suddenly, she turned to face Brother Thomas, her features distorting into a twisted, animalistic sneer.
The young man's faith faltered for the briefest moment, and in that instant, the room plunged into darkness so profound it was like being swallowed by a black hole. A sound of tearing flesh filled the air, followed by a soul-wrenching scream that seemed to carry the echo of a thousand tortured souls.
When the light returned, Brother Thomas lay on the floor, lifeless. His eyes, once filled with pious devotion, were now vacant pools of horror. Dr. Blackwood felt the weight of something ancient and profoundly evil in the room, a presence that seemed to feed on their fear and pain.
Elara was gone, the door still locked, the window bars untouched. Only the crimson smear on the bed and the coarse hairs remained, taunting them with the reality of what they had witnessed.
The doctor's mind reeled. This was not a case for his medical expertise. This was a battle with a horror so primal, so wild, it defied understanding. The devil had made an appearance, and he had left his mark.
The next days passed in a blur of whispers and shadows. The Harrows, once hopeful, now moved through the manor with the shuffling gait of the defeated, their eyes haunted by what had transpired in that chamber. They spoke little, and when they did, it was of punishment and retribution, of the wrath of God and the depths of hell.
Father Michael and Brother Thomas, the two men of God, continued their nightly vigils, their prayers now tinged with desperation. Yet, the demon remained elusive, the girl's body a battleground for the divine and the infernal. The priest's once firm conviction wavered like candlelight in a storm.
On the seventh night, the voice grew stronger, the air thick with the scent of decay. It spoke of the wildness of nature, of the savagery that lay just beneath the veneer of civilization. "You think you've tamed us," it snarled, the sound echoing through the house like the growl of a predator. "You've built your walls, your churches, but we are the earth beneath your feet. We are the darkness in your hearts, the rot in your souls."
The exorcism was no longer a battle for Elara's soul; it had become a struggle against the very fabric of reality, a dance with the devil himself. The room grew colder, the air thick with the stench of the grave, the candle flames flickering erratically. The shadows grew teeth and claws, reaching out to touch the trembling men with whispers of dread.
And then, amidst the cacophony of prayers and screams, the room fell silent. The air grew heavy, as if the very oxygen had been siphoned out. The candles guttered out, leaving only the moon's ghostly glow. In the stillness, something new filled the air: a sense of anticipation, a coiled spring ready to strike.
The bed, once a bastion of terror, was now a stage for a silent drama. The priest and the doctor stood, panting, sweat beading on their brows. The girl lay still, her breathing shallow. The silence stretched, a taut wire threatening to snap at any moment.
Suddenly, a sound. Not a voice, but a deep, resonant click, echoing through the room. It was a sound of ancient power, a declaration of presence from the deepest recesses of the wild. The floorboards trembled, the walls groaned, and from the girl's mouth, a new form of darkness emerged – a black smoke that coalesced into the shape of a monstrous maw, a jaw unhinging to reveal a mouth that was the void itself. The Devil's jaw, come to claim his prize.
The room was alive with fear, the very essence of repugnance and fear. The men of God stumbled back, their words forgotten, their faith shaken. The jaws grew closer, a gaping maw that threatened to consume them all.
In the quiet before the storm, a single thought resonated through Blackwood's mind: This was no mere possession. This was the true face of evil, the horror that lurked in the wild, the punisher of the arrogant, the devourer of innocence. This was the wild heart of the universe, untamed and unyielding. And it had come for them.
The maw grew, the air thickening until it was a physical force, a suffocating miasma that tasted of decay and the cold embrace of the grave. The men of faith stumbled back, their prayers forgotten, their eyes wide with a terror that no holy water could cleanse. The darkness in the room grew teeth, the shadows stretching into claws that reached for their hearts, their very souls.
The girl on the bed, once Elara, now a grotesque caricature of the innocent child she had been, began to convulse. Her limbs elongated, her body twisting into forms that defied human anatomy. Her skin, once pale and translucent, grew a sickly, mottled green, her eyes sinking into their sockets as the creature within her took hold. Her mouth stretched wide, revealing a blackness so absolute it seemed to swallow the light.
The Devil's jaw, a manifestation of the deepest, most primal fears of the human psyche, descended upon them. It was not the serene, silent darkness of the void, but a living, hungry maw that demanded their attention, their pain, their very existence. The room trembled, the walls seeming to pulse in time with the monstrous visage.
The exorcism had become a battle not for Elara's soul, but for their own sanity. The priests, their faces etched with despair, knew they had ventured into realms they could never fully comprehend, let alone conquer. The creature within her grew stronger with every second, feeding on their terror, growing bolder.
The house itself seemed to come alive around them, the ancient stones groaning in protest at the disturbance of their slumber. The very fabric of reality felt as if it were being torn apart, the wildness of nature seeping through the cracks to reclaim what had been lost. The air grew colder still, the scent of moss and decaying leaves filling the chamber.
Above the cacophony of fear, the creature's voice grew clearer, a symphony of malevolence that spoke of the futility of their struggle. "You think you can chain the wild," it rasped, the girl's once-sweet voice now a cacophony of hisses and growls. "You think your walls, your prayers, can hold back the night. But we are the night. We are the hunt."
As the creature's power grew, so too did the room's transformation. The bedposts cracked and split, the floorboards heaving as if in the throes of an earthquake. The walls wept a black, viscous fluid that dripped down to pool around their feet, a sticky, living tar that held the scent of the abyss.
The exorcism had become a dance with the Devil himself, and as the men of science and faith stumbled, the creature grew stronger, feeding on their doubt and horror. It was a true crime, not of the flesh, but of the soul – a violation so profound, so absolute, it left them questioning the very nature of existence.
The battle was lost, the house reclaimed by the wild. The priests staggered from the room, their eyes haunted by the darkness they had unleashed. The file on Blackwood's desk grew fatter with each passing night, the story of Elara Harrow's tragic fate forever etched in the annals of true crime, a grim reminder of the cost of meddling with the untamed heart of the forest.
The doctor could not shake the image of the girl's transformation. Her delicate features had become a grotesque mask of the creature's dominion, her body a canvas for the wild's dark artistry. The clicks and whirs that had once been so disturbing now haunted his dreams, echoes of a nature unchecked, a horror beyond the realm of his understanding.
The exorcism had not gone wrong; it had merely revealed the truth. The Devil did not come in the guise of a mad girl but as the very essence of the wild, the ancient spirit of the forest made flesh. The room, the manor, the land itself pulsed with the mature, terrifying darkness that had been coaxed into the open.
The Harrows, shattered by the ordeal, fled their ancestral home. The manor stood alone, a sentinel of despair, a monument to the unspeakable horror that had claimed their daughter and the men who had sought to save her. The forest closed in, its embrace tightening like a noose around the once-grand estate.
The local townspeople spoke in whispers of the 'cursed' Blackwood Manor, of the wild things that now roamed its halls. The priest and his young acolyte were never seen again, their fates forever entwined with the creature that had used them as pawns in a cosmic game of cat and mouse.
Yet, amidst the ruin, the file remained, a testament to the nightmare that had unfolded within those cold, stone walls. The pages whispered of the punishment dealt to the arrogant, the unyielding power of the wild, and the reality that lurked in the shadows of every heart. A story of true crime, not of theft or murder, but of the ultimate trespass against the natural order.
And as the years passed, the legend of Blackwood Manor grew, feeding on the whispers of the trees and the screams that echoed through the night. The wildness within grew stronger, the darkness more profound. The house stood, a silent sentinel of fear, the Devil's jaw ever vigilant, waiting for the next brave soul to dare enter its embrace.
The townsfolk spoke in hushed tones of the doctor who had tried to tame the beast, of the priests who had brought the horror to their doorstep. They spoke of the girl, Elara, whose soul had been the battleground for the divine and the infernal, her body forever marred by the claws of the wild.
The forest, too, had changed. The animals grew bolder, their eyes reflecting a newfound intelligence, their movements eerily reminiscent of the girl's unnatural grace. The plants grew thick and twisted, the trees leaning closer to the manor as if to listen to the silent cries of the damned that still echoed through its halls.
The file on Blackwood's desk grew dusty, forgotten by the world outside, but not by the doctor. The horrors he had witnessed had seeped into his very being, the images of Elara's transformation burned into his mind. The clicks and whirs of the creature's language had become a constant soundtrack to his nightmares, a taunting reminder of the true nature of evil.
The exorcism had not been a failure; it had merely been an awakening. The wild heart of the universe had revealed itself, and it had no intention of being silenced. The true crime was not in the possession of an innocent girl but in the punishment dealt to those who sought to deny the darkness that dwelled within each of them, a punishment that had left an indelible stain on the very fabric of the manor.
The house stood, a monument to fear and despair, the air around it thick with the scent of the wild. The ghosts of the Harrow family haunted its halls, forever bound to the land they had so desperately sought to escape. The town of Blackwood grew smaller, the forest larger, the manor's influence spreading like a malevolent stain.
And yet, there were those who were drawn to the manor, to the promise of power and the whispered secrets of the wild. They came, one by one, seeking knowledge, seeking redemption, seeking the ultimate thrill of facing the Devil himself. Each one found their fate intertwined with the horror that lurked within, each one adding a new chapter to the story of the manor's eternal battle between the tame and the wild.
The exorcism had ended, but the true story of Blackwood Manor had only just begun. The darkness was mature now, fed by the blood of the innocent and the fear of the guilty. It waited, patient and unyielding, for the next to come knocking, for the next to dare dance with the demon that lived in the shadows of their own hearts. And as they stepped over the threshold, they would hear the echoes of that ancient, chilling laugh, the sound of the wild claiming another soul.